Wednesday, 27 May 2009

Lapped

Before I had hoped
To have babies the same age,
Possibly this time?


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My first attempt at haiku. I would thoroughly recommend checking out IF in Tokyo for a true master.

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And for something a little longer, watch me try and put a positive spin on taking a long time to get pregnant at Fertility Authority.


11 comments:

  1. I don't like or understand haiku.

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  2. Well that telt me Xbox. Looks like you aren't alone, this being my least commented on post!

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  3. Short and sweet ...
    and crossing my fingers that the last line changes to "Definitely this time" ASAP.

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  4. ..and maybe a sign: my supa-sekrit spam-filter word was "ovadible"
    (there's an egg in there somewhere)

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  5. I've never really got the haiku thing either, but I'm impressed at your efforts!

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  6. Corymbia, any word with 'ov'in it is definitely a sign!

    Ok, ok. I get it Jane. This post was a fail. Och well! I just like the way the good haiku writers can tell so much in just three lines.

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  7. can i just say that I liked it! Short but poignant - we could all learn from that.

    Gigi xx

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  8. And that is just one of the reasons why I love you, Gi. (Because you are short but poignant).

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  9. oi, enough of the short! G x

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  10. Well you aren't exactly an amazon are you, Gi?

    Ta Mary - someone else with taste!

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I've resisted word verification for ages but I'm getting so many spam comments at the moment that I think it is time. Sorry!