Before I had hoped
To have babies the same age,
Possibly this time?
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My first attempt at haiku. I would thoroughly recommend checking out IF in Tokyo for a true master.
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And for something a little longer, watch me try and put a positive spin on taking a long time to get pregnant at Fertility Authority.
11 comments:
I don't like or understand haiku.
Well that telt me Xbox. Looks like you aren't alone, this being my least commented on post!
Short and sweet ...
and crossing my fingers that the last line changes to "Definitely this time" ASAP.
..and maybe a sign: my supa-sekrit spam-filter word was "ovadible"
(there's an egg in there somewhere)
I've never really got the haiku thing either, but I'm impressed at your efforts!
Corymbia, any word with 'ov'in it is definitely a sign!
Ok, ok. I get it Jane. This post was a fail. Och well! I just like the way the good haiku writers can tell so much in just three lines.
can i just say that I liked it! Short but poignant - we could all learn from that.
Gigi xx
And that is just one of the reasons why I love you, Gi. (Because you are short but poignant).
oi, enough of the short! G x
I like it!!
Well you aren't exactly an amazon are you, Gi?
Ta Mary - someone else with taste!
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